Post by Zealot on Dec 9, 2014 11:18:36 GMT -5
Hey Guys.
Thought I put this up here a while back. Guess I didn't. Well, I wrote a story a few months ago featuring my character on the MUCK, Clandestine.
This story isn't inspired from the MUCK, I play Clandestine a little differently there otherwise I would have very short scenes methinks. Hehe. Anyway, here's the link if you wanted to take a look.
www.fimfiction.net/story/223894/a-clandestine-practice
When I posted the first time around I got quite a rude and negative response for something that, I feel, is some of my best writing in terms of actual writing structure. I was experimenting with a style at the time and, most of the feedback was about the samey plot. Which was fair enough, but I don't really care about that. I can write a really interesting and complex plot already if I wanted to, but I'm not really trying for that right now. I'm looking more on feedback about this new structure I'm playing with, since that's what the whole point of the story was. Still, I kind of like the character now and I'm interested in writing another. It's just that I'm sort of disheartened from it because of the backlash I got which shook my already unsteady confidence.
So yeah, if you're interested, I'd sure appreciate a 'it's not that bad' or something similar. That would make me feel a whole lot better. Sure, if its bad then tell me but, be nice about it? Hehe.
Thanks. That was a lot more waffle than I intended. Anyway...
-Zealot
Thought I put this up here a while back. Guess I didn't. Well, I wrote a story a few months ago featuring my character on the MUCK, Clandestine.
This story isn't inspired from the MUCK, I play Clandestine a little differently there otherwise I would have very short scenes methinks. Hehe. Anyway, here's the link if you wanted to take a look.
www.fimfiction.net/story/223894/a-clandestine-practice
When I posted the first time around I got quite a rude and negative response for something that, I feel, is some of my best writing in terms of actual writing structure. I was experimenting with a style at the time and, most of the feedback was about the samey plot. Which was fair enough, but I don't really care about that. I can write a really interesting and complex plot already if I wanted to, but I'm not really trying for that right now. I'm looking more on feedback about this new structure I'm playing with, since that's what the whole point of the story was. Still, I kind of like the character now and I'm interested in writing another. It's just that I'm sort of disheartened from it because of the backlash I got which shook my already unsteady confidence.
So yeah, if you're interested, I'd sure appreciate a 'it's not that bad' or something similar. That would make me feel a whole lot better. Sure, if its bad then tell me but, be nice about it? Hehe.
Thanks. That was a lot more waffle than I intended. Anyway...
-Zealot